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Little Butterfly Her free spirit soars
She flys with so much grace
I can't believe she made it
He says "look at her beauty"
His hands reach out to touch her
She lands on his hands and sighs
We all run over and look
Her black and green wings are her freedom
No one will take that away
Love is... Love is....
Love is walking along the beach at night.
Love is being there for someone when they need it.
Love is knowing you are safe.
Love is not caring what other people think.
Love is staying up till all hours talking on the phone.
Love is holding eachother during a storm.
Love is dancing under the stars.
Love is a pinic in the park.
Love is cuddling on a cold night.
Love is getting butterflys everytime you see them.
Love is that quick kiss goodbye.
Love is looking into eachothers eyes.
Love is no wanting to go to sleep because reality is better then a dream
Love is showing your true colors.
Love is not knowing whats going t

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Everyother line is the boy thinking or speaking. The other lines are the girl thinking or speaking. Sort of inspired by sic transit gloria by brand new
Obviously I don't have guys experience on sex, just girls.
This isn't ment to catigorize all boys. I know that not all guys are jerks like this. I wrote this from a broken hearted point of view, if that makes the poem make anymore sense. Sorry if anyone was offened.

And for the people who said it doesn't hurt that much, its different for everyone. Our bodies aren't all created equal.

Thanks
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~milloan 4 days ago  New member
lol, actually, the way you described a man in these situations is spot on.

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Mood: Pain ~LokisRedDawn 5 days ago  Student Writer
This is really raw. You really struck a chord with me.

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Mood: Joy ~gothgirl1212 Apr 16, 2012
Very amusing :)
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~Washington118 Mar 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no human body has an equall. they're all special and should be treated ith great care.

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were you right to?
give your life to?
someone else to (run it for you)?
do you wish you?
kept your life to?
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~KinaMae Jan 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i honestly thought this was a teeny bit funny, but it was great as it explains what really happens with all the awkwardness xD
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Mood: Joy ~DebsterArt Dec 13, 2011
wow if people are going to get offended over this then they need to grow the f*** up! you got this right on the dot, it reminds me of the first time i had sex so people can screw off if they dont like it. bravo to you!

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~akco Dec 8, 2011  Professional Writer
Punctuation would make this more enjoyable to read. Kinda sexist to assume the guy is a sex obsessed prat.

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~thtaylorth Oct 28, 2011
interesting love the thinks/speaks thing you should submit more :))))

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Mood: Sympathy ~rabies8 Oct 2, 2011
i like your style but where is all the foreplay. he didnt play with your breasts or suck on your nipples. he didnt lick you to make you feel good or finger you to part your hymen before he entered. if this rly did happen, i feel kinda sorry for you. your right not a bodies are created equal but if u know what you doing then everyone can feel good.

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~Sianamia Sep 29, 2011
I really like it. interesting way of writing it. it works really well
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