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I sit on her bed
He sits on my bed
I don't know what to say
He looks so nervous
She looks hot
I hope he knows what hes doing
Tonight I get laid
Tonight I make love to him
I look in her eyes
I look in his eyes
I lean in for a kiss
I close my eyes
She presses her lips on mine
He's kissing me
What do I do next?
I put my hand on his face
Should I touch her chest?
I want him to touch me
I put my hand on her chest
Wow thats good
Our kiss gets more hot
I feel a connection
Should i get on top of her?
I want it to be special
I'm glad I brought a condom
I break the kiss and lay back on the bed
She wants me
"Do you have a condom?"
Oh yeah "yes I do"
"Lets do it"
I crawl on top of her
I take off my shirt
Holy shit she took off her shirt
"Take yours off"
Wow this is really happening
I take off my skirt
Oh my god shes half naked
Damn I hope this doesn't hurt
I take off my pants and boxers
There goes my bra and thong
Holy shit I'm hard
Holy shit he's hard
"Are you sure?"
"Hell yes" I'm naked aren't I?
I put the condom on
This is going way too fast
"Ready?"
I nod
I crawl on top of her
I spread my legs
I kiss her
Wow this is it
I enter her
Fuck that hurts
"You ok?"
"mmhmm" obviously not!
Damn this is alot better then doing it myself
Um ow jackass
She looks like shes in pain
He looks nervous again
"Wanna continue"
"Yes" Oh god get this over with

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Everyother line is the boy thinking or speaking. The other lines are the girl thinking or speaking. Sort of inspired by sic transit gloria by brand new
Obviously I don't have guys experience on sex, just girls.
This isn't ment to catigorize all boys. I know that not all guys are jerks like this. I wrote this from a broken hearted point of view, if that makes the poem make anymore sense. Sorry if anyone was offened.

And for the people who said it doesn't hurt that much, its different for everyone. Our bodies aren't all created equal.

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:iconbigbadred:
What I don't seem to understand is why the boy is made out to be the jerk in all this. Now I'm only assuming from this poem that these two (obviously) are teenagers. This is their first time, which you can conclude given their inner monologue. I can understand from a teenage point of view for girls that they have these fantasies and feelings of love and affection when it comes to their first time, but boys in general are not gonna have that. By that, I mean that their minds are not necessarily rotating around the concept of "love making". This boy is excited, hormonal, but not experienced. Realty is, he's not going to know much about foreplay. Not once did the girl say that something hurt, even when he asked not once, not twice, but four times! Before someone makes a comment, as a woman, I know I was nervous when I was having my first time and I didn't know how to express that something hurt. I was nervous and not sure what everything was supposed to feel like. But that doesn't mean it was the guy's fault either, he had no idea! I haven't read anything else by you or know how old you were when you wrote this, but the one thing that I did like about your poem are the non-realistic expectations of sex and the feelings that go behind it, but I assume that was not intentional. And for any other young people who may read this comment I just want to say: Don't be scared to talk to your partner and express what your feeling before, during, or after sex. If something hurts, say it. Then you can both work through it together. The boy in the poem kept asking if she was ready, if she was sure. Boys, do the same thing.
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:iconwarahi:
personally I doubt I'll ever have sex =(
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:iconxxxfurryluverxxx:
Not all guys care when they see pain in their girls eyes. The feel of him finally being able to enter her body is such a rush that they cant really see the pain that she is feeling. I can speak from experience, not all guys care. Sorry if i was a little harsh with my diction, but i was hurt and tend to judge.
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~kalika12 Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry if it was bad for you...^^;
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:iconthe-mysterious-j:
Sorry to say that, but it is plain stupid and nothing else not to say when it hurts. It definitely doesn't have to hurt if ou juust say "stop" and continue when you're more in the mood. I know what I'm talking of, we tried like for half a year, but it's getting better if you just take it easy. And I wouldn't say my body is created very generously.
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:iconanthony-twili:
LOL oh god my first time went sort of like this, but with more foreplay xD
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:iconkagome-245:
That was great
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:iconkeni-chan102:
!Keni-Chan102 Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
so so so true
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:iconkiaraxheart:
Very true. Nicely done, love it. :)
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~Ra3W0lf Sep 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Kinda feel sorry for whoever has an experience like this. A first time should be with someone you love. But I'm coming from a different point of view. My first time was wonderful and with someone I love. But, other than that, I really like it. Probably a good way to describe the first time for a lot of people.
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